clive schools playground

In this story I worked on using interesting sentence with joiners and correct capital and full stops.

I went to the playground and I put my feet in the cold rocks.I felt like the playground needed help and it had to have people on it.I was walking back to the class and I felt a cold breeze fly past me as I touched the very soft petals.I felt a damp breeze fly past me.It gave me a big shiver."BRRRRRR"! I said "OUCH"! That hurt.When I siad "OUCH"! I got spiked by some thorns.When I was back in the class I looked out the window.I heard birds tweet.Tweet tweet tweet.It was nice and then I felt a drip on me.So I thought it was raning but it was not.It was just me.